Sorry to put this is such a blunt way but...I'd give this lip sync 10 out of 10 for creativity and flair but only 5 out of ten for accuracy. Moving the head was not part of the exercise...getting the lip sync right first was (moving the head is disguising the mistakes - I can't help you). I'd avoid the 'run before you can walk' approach to learning in future - Post your work in stages so your get the relevant feedback at the right time.
That's no problem! When you say accuracy do you mean in the visual pronunciation? Looking back at it the exaggeration feels like it's all in the wrong place perhaps whilst some consonants are missed out completely. I'll start posting the work in separate parts from now; it was only how I pushed through the tutorials in one go that I didn't stop to think about splitting them up. (Though I must add the moving-head wasn't to disguise the faults on purpose - I just didn't see them!) Thanks for the feedback!
Sorry, no I didn't mean you meant to hide your mistake...I meant they are hidden due to the moving head - Eg I can't help you because its hard to focus. My initial reaction to your lip sync is that there are things slightly wrong/off at each stage...the jaw bounce, phonemes etc...However its hard to distinguish the problems due to the head moving and only posting the end result. I'm happy to take a look at in class?
I like how you moved his head, makes it look a lot more natural :)
ReplyDeleteThanks!! Ahaha yeah, if only the body moved too though! ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ
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ReplyDeleteSorry to put this is such a blunt way but...I'd give this lip sync 10 out of 10 for creativity and flair but only 5 out of ten for accuracy. Moving the head was not part of the exercise...getting the lip sync right first was (moving the head is disguising the mistakes - I can't help you). I'd avoid the 'run before you can walk' approach to learning in future - Post your work in stages so your get the relevant feedback at the right time.
Hey Alan,
DeleteThat's no problem! When you say accuracy do you mean in the visual pronunciation? Looking back at it the exaggeration feels like it's all in the wrong place perhaps whilst some consonants are missed out completely. I'll start posting the work in separate parts from now; it was only how I pushed through the tutorials in one go that I didn't stop to think about splitting them up. (Though I must add the moving-head wasn't to disguise the faults on purpose - I just didn't see them!) Thanks for the feedback!
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ReplyDeleteSorry, no I didn't mean you meant to hide your mistake...I meant they are hidden due to the moving head - Eg I can't help you because its hard to focus. My initial reaction to your lip sync is that there are things slightly wrong/off at each stage...the jaw bounce, phonemes etc...However its hard to distinguish the problems due to the head moving and only posting the end result. I'm happy to take a look at in class?
Ah! Thank you for clarification, of course thank you very much, that'd be very helpful :^)
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